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porcelain doll poem
What would you say about this poem?
I don't know how far
you can push until I fall.
We're all just inches from
breaking like porcelain dolls.
I don't see myself living like this,
and I don't think that I can last.
I'm seconds from dissolving,
and I'm stuck inside the past.
I'm not the one that you want,
and I'm not the one for you.
I'm too strong to be broken,
and you're too good to be true.
So, if you chose to give up on me,
and if you no longer want to try,
I would understand completely,
and I would say goodbye.
But, if by chance you want me,
and if you needed me there again,
I would drop my world to please you,
but until then I will just pretend.
wow... I really like it. it sounds like the person in this poem is really in love and just wants the other to be happy, and I think it's sort of cute :]
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Porcelain (A Poem)
Does this poetry have a style name? Will those that like or write poetry critique?
No Small Miracle!
One toe that moves,
One mind that ponders—
One heart that beats,
One love that grows fonder—
One hand that touches,
One tree in the forest!
One porcelain doll,
One circus clown—
One baseball hat,
One small town—
One guitar, a man a-strumming.
One tree in the forest!
One fine performance,
One piece of art—
One remembrance,
One sweetheart—
One-step taken,
One tree in the forest!
One moon lit sky,
One star so high—
One weenie a-roasting,
One woman—
One man a-boasting,
One tree in the forest!
One attraction,
One face—
On touch
One embrace—
One kiss.
One tree in the forest!
I have many verses such as this. The tree in the forest is better explained in another poem which speaks of the cross. My feelings are that there are no small miracles. All of God's blessings, each tiny raindrop is a magnificient miracle. And the tree, I suppose represents the cross.
We take so much for granted, that more often than not we forget, or over look, the tiny blessings. What a beautiful reminder this was. I thank you for that...
Much love always,
Temari
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Jasmin Mans' poem 'Nicki Minaj' is deep;"Do u know what this media is trying to do to u?They will They will porcelain doll the s*!t (cont)
Jasmin Mans' poem 'Nicki Minaj' is deep;"Do u know what this media is trying to do to u?They will They will porcelain doll the s*!t (cont)